First sight,First love...

True love never dies it only gets stronger by time...

Siting in a cab he met her,she gave a squint
look,his eyes were fixed for a while...
There cums a road with a cleave and both
strutted...
He daub her image,while his cheeks bedew with
tears...
Providentially he met her again in a grocery
shop,she gave a squint look,refuse to give a 2nd
glance...
There cums her comrades n both strolled away...
He daub her image,while his cheeks bedew with
tears...
They happen to meet accidentially most of d
times on d same way..(Months later)... ...
She was'nt a spinster anymre,but a spouse..
Destine to a grim fate,was woebegone n
vexed,hitched up,with d sudden realization that
there was'nt love n realiance..
Feeling forlorn,went out walking on d street,not
knowing where...
Just den a house prepossessed her heart,she
peeped inside,was a beautifull garden,she
entered slowly n stood still with d beauty...
With d harsh wind,the door of d house
slammed...
Took her steps inside slowly,there was none...
But bolt frm d blue,she went near,peered it vry
closely n was left boogle...
It was dos images hanging on d wall which he
painted sme months ere...
He heard d footsteps n was startled to see his
love...
She turned n smirked at him n said,'There's no
difference in all these pictures bcz I can see a
teardrop in ur every single piece of art,many
may regard these pictures to b very rough,but I
say it a Masterpiece'..
She came forward,holded his hand n spoke,'Your
tear means d anguish of ur silence.If u cant
speak I am ready to b ur words..I LØVE YØU'

Author's Note

I expect positive feedback..

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

You do write so well.. it's just speechless this time...
You expect positive feedback and I have no words... So I expect you to read my heart all by yourself and know that this particular piece left a strong imprint in me... thus, I do not have much words to express... very nice..
please do give me some tips as you wrote so amazingly, tips how I can improve with mine.... thanks...
Anindita : )

[Randhir kaur]

It will be my privilege to do so Anindita,but I believe you do not need my tips or suggestions because you are absolutely amazing in your write,better than me..You are a great poet in itself dear..
I appreciate your feedback. It really means a lot to me. I am happy to know the impact of my write. Thank you Anindita. Due respect ~your friend in writing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

I am glad to have your warm support and I too feel privileged, thanks a lot for the compliment and also I enjoy your writings very much. Most welcome too...

[Coyote Poetry]

When love comes. Can't be stop.
"She came forward,holded his hand n spoke,'Your
tear means d anguish of ur silence.If u cant
speak I am ready to b ur words..I LØVE YØU'"
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

Thank your Coyote for your words. Stay connected.

[Coyote Poetry]

I try to stop by daily and I hope to read more of your work. You are welcome.

[Randhir kaur]

Oh so thankful and sweet of you Coyote..Let's stay in touch..