Prince of Peace

I am using a website because I need to get this writing out! If I don't have a schedule, it won't get done, and having readers to keep me accountable is extremely helpful to sticking to a schedule. I am always open to fresh eyes giving me advice, but do understand this will be raw and unpolished writing. It would be more beneficial to me to receive advice that is focused on the story, dialogue, characterization, and ect instead of grammar and sentence structure because those flaws are easier to fix. I'm just trying to get the story out right now. I appreciate anyone who takes the time to encourage me on my writing journey, and especially those who go out of their way to give me advice. Thank you!