Without you

Without you

A Poem by Katy Stash

I'm swimming in an endless ocean
I'm drowning in a deep river
I'm walking in a dessert
I'm lost without you
I can't run
Strange though it may seem
I can't move on
Without you
I've made so many mistakes
And right now all I wanted from you
Was to save me
From this heart that's draught
I can't even cry
Cause tears will turn into dust
I'm lost here in the dessert
Without you
How can I fly
When my wings are broken
An endless road would be enough
For me to run back and forth to you
Just to be sure I'll not run without you
I don't want to fall again
Like I did
I can't swim
Without you

© 2012 Katy Stash


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Wow, this is some emotionally powerful stuff. Awesome poem! I can totally relate and you put everything into such great words. You painted quite the picture with your descriptions. Fantastic!
~Rae Emeral

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like how you extend the watery imagery (river/ocean/tears) then contrast it well with draught/desert.

Cause tears will turn to dust

Fav line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a deep powerful read,
Loved the opening lines the best.
This is very well written.
Love the ending as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Katy Stash
Katy Stash

L.A, CA



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I'm a writer I love to write and I wouldn't be able to live without writting. Untill now I've wrote 54 poems and few of them you can read it on my blog. I love when I meet people with the same passio.. more..

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