Her Through My eyes

Her Through My eyes

A Story by !FireCracker!
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For our beloved MelissaJo. Yeah girl, it's you.

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She’s my anchor in the storm, my safe harbor when I’m running from life’s cruelties. My shoulder to cry on, my target to rage at, my adventure to set sail on.

Her eyes are twin oceans offering only the greatest quests for the only the bravest to try. They glow, kissed with some inner oceanic lightning. Her spirit shines through pure and strong, tempting the weak, intimidating the brave. Her heart cries out, through those eyes, for her martyr, waiting for only the worthiest one to finally make it to her heart.

A mind boggling combination of leather and lace, delicate sea-foam masking the deadly rocks beneath the bubbles. She’ll smile sweetly, then promptly inform you that you’re an idiot. She fixes what she can, and flows around what she can’t making it part of her plan, bringing it into her realm.

Her words are a siren’s song, echoing out into the unsuspecting masses. Crashing upon them in torrid wave after wave of brutal truth. She shows no mercy, it’s not in her nature. Keep up, get out of the way, or get trampled. She’s driven, her spectacular eyes riveted to her goal, relentless. Her ambition knows no bounds, endless.

A beloved partner in crime, a cherished sister of the heart, a cheerful antagonist, and the great mystery that the world is all the richer for having.

She is the ocean; Beautiful, alluring, endless, unyielding, a perfect living tempest.

© 2008 !FireCracker!


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!FireCracker!
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"A mind boggling combination of leather and lace, delicate sea-foam masking the deadly rocks beneath the bubbles"
With lines this creative, you are doing it friend. this is a wonderful tribute to someone you care a great deal about. I think I could like someone like her. Hard yet soft.. very well written. keep the pen scribbling..

Lynne


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I love the ocean also. I have wrote many words to show appreciation for the sea. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful description. She sound like a Angel. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"A mind boggling combination of leather and lace, delicate sea-foam masking the deadly rocks beneath the bubbles"
With lines this creative, you are doing it friend. this is a wonderful tribute to someone you care a great deal about. I think I could like someone like her. Hard yet soft.. very well written. keep the pen scribbling..

Lynne


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 4, 2008

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Well, you've heard of the black sheep of the family? Meet the White sheep, that's right, I'm the palest and most boring person in my family. A little bit emo, a little bit rock, and a .. more..

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