Tears to laughter

Tears to laughter

A Poem by Spiceyyy
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Wrote this one night :)

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Tears become laughter
laughter becomes tears

I see your face after all these years

You still make me laugh but
my laughter soon turns to tears

We've realised what we had
and threw away to soon

We laugh and joke on the phone most nights
saying quotes from finding nemo

But once again my laughter turns to tears

Few days later we talk again this time not on the phone
but on msn

I'm too busy crying to talk properly
but soon you turn my tears to laughter

I'm glad we are still so close.

Tears to laughter
and laughter to tears

© 2011 Spiceyyy


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I liked this poem a lot, but I'm not sure if you had been trying to rhyme in the beginning, and then stopped? I sometimes find myself doing that too. I'll get into a certain tempo and pace, and realize that my words get out of control. But even if that wasn't the case, it was still very well written. I would adivse you clean up the small amount of typos along the way, and you'll have yourself an awesome poem!
Keep writing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Spiceyyy
Spiceyyy

Telford, Shropshire, United Kingdom



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