The Cruel Soul

A monologue i wrote myself for a audition about something that happened to me in my past

The cruel soul which tore my world apart
should never have won my heart.

At first life together was amazing
until my life turned black and you went crazy

You said everything was my fault
after each fatal punch

I knew enough was enough
when she was pronounced dead

You are a cruel soul
and never deserve happiness

I will forget about you and what you did to me
and soon you won't even be a memory

After all your just a cruel soul

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

powerful piece yet again smurf I hope you have forgotten this cruel soul as they really aren't worth your time

[M.Babu]

It's got potential. I liked the line 'you are a cruel soul and never deserve happiness'. You're good keep writing