Longing
A Poem by Katsura
A poem about wanting something you can't have.
As I reachFurther than I could ever hope to touchI realizeThis dreamThis thing that I want with all my heartIs not mineAnd never will be.
© 2019 Katsura
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I like this poem. It reminds people that are struggling that even if you are falling in a bottomless pit, there is still hope.
But I also like how the second part basically states, hey you can have a dream, but is it really yours or was it given to you?
Anyway, I really like how simple short, and emotionally impacting this poem was.
Keep up the wonderful work Katsura!!!
P.S. I love your name (^U^)
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I like this poem. It reminds people that are struggling that even if you are falling in a bottomless pit, there is still hope.
But I also like how the second part basically states, hey you can have a dream, but is it really yours or was it given to you?
Anyway, I really like how simple short, and emotionally impacting this poem was.
Keep up the wonderful work Katsura!!!
P.S. I love your name (^U^)
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Nothing wrong with reaching, even if there's no chance.
Shows great expectations.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Unless you reach for the stars and fall off the roof.
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Full of emotions, the way you express them is precious
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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such a sad write really, nicely expressed though
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I could feel the disappointment within this wish filled poem.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 20, 2019
Last Updated on February 20, 2019
Tags: desire
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KatsuraSt. Louis, MO
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Young adult male from the United States. Writing is an outlet for my emotions and struggles. more..
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