Part 3: Thank You

Third part to a journey inward Part 1: Epiphany Part 2: Reckoning

Hello tiny buttercup.

Share your secrets with me. Confide in me. Lean in and whisper.

Show me strength in tenderness. Petals, soft and gentle. So small. Pitted against this harsh world. So big. 

One lapse in judgement. One misstep. And yet you stand tall.

Cool, gentle breeze. You sway ever so slightly. Autumn morning. Glowing sunrise.

Here with you.

Teach me to understand. Openness. Beauty.

Hello tiny buttercup.

Thank you.

Reviews

[Rini B]

Really beautiful. Thought all the three pieces were quite solid. Read them twice.

[dan]

Tina, I didn't read Parts 1 or 2, but this final peace speaks volumes about what you intend to convey. As I read this a feeling of deep peace came over me and I felt as warm as if YOUR sun's soft rays were cascading over me. And if Parts 1 and 2 were anything near as enveloping as this peaceful moment I wish that I had read them as LEAST once. Very nice work. take care...dan

[747]

Good ending. I like it; soft and gentle. Good resolve too. All of us make mistakes, but the important thing is learning from it and being able to walk on.