As she lays with pain.

And there, she lays.

 With her hands over here eyes.

With her legs curled up.

 With her hair a mess.

And with her heart just broken.

She feels so helpless.

Dose not know what to do.

 For just a moment she thinks about running out.

After him, telling him to stay.

 But yet she still lays.

For a quick minute she sits up to look out her window.

 Just in time to see his car drive away.

She gently lays her head down, telling herself everything will be ok.

 Then realizes she is laying where he use to lay.

She slowly moves her hands back over he eyes, and begins to cry.

 

So with her hands over her eyes.

 Her legs curled up.

Her hair still a mess.

She lays next to her broken heart.

 Wishing all this pain away.

                                                              .......Krissy Straley.....

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

I definitely got the broken heart when reading this. A few typos ( you mean does ...not dose line 7) and (6th line from the end you mean her eyes not he eyes). with a little care and structure this would read easier but the emotions are all there.