Out At Sea

You are the one who told me

I’m not easy to please

But you are perfect for me

And now you’re out at sea

 

I’ve watched you fade away

And I don’t know what to say

The memories stand still

Like a crisp dollar bill

 

The touch of your lips on mine

Makes me feel define

The way you say my name

Makes me feel ashamed

 

I can’t say goodbye

I’ll take my own hand

To show you I try

Again, and again

 

Won’t you let us see

The perfect time is now

Waiting to let it be

Go ahead and take your bow

 

You’re the one who told me

I’m not easy to please

But you are perfect for me

And now you’re out at sea

Reviews

[highthought]

are u not easy to be pleased
if not why didnt u answer him ?

[Viki Rachel]

How very romantic. Good write.

[Tony]

Ohh, no-- "perfect for me/ but now your out to sea" Yep, thats the way it is. You find the perfect someone then they become "out" of ourlives separted by wave after wave. Passionate write here.

[Light]

heart break as your other half has left you; out to sea. almost like Odysseus' wife...lol. lovely write!!! bellisima

[wiley coyote]

Very lovely, yet very sad. Who is he?