First ImpressionsA Story by RaspberryBulletsHow you present yourself to people upon meeting can influence the way they think about you for a long time.I splash through the puddles, sending drops of water flying
against my legs, where they drip back down into my boots and squelch in my
socks. There’s a loud crack of thunder, pushing me faster toward the shelter I
can see ahead. Soaking wet and panting I reach the shelter and step out of the
heavy rain. My jacket’s drenched and only making me colder, so I shrug it off
and wring out the excess water before draping lightly around my shoulders
again. I gradually catch my breath, leaning against the chilly cement wall. The
rain is pounding on the flimsy tin roof above my head and doesn’t sound as
though it’s going to stop any time soon. I sink down to the ground and pull my
knees against my chest, and start to remove my shoes. I’m in the middle of
shaking out my sopping socks when I hear footsteps hammering towards me.
Probably someone else looking for cover. I lay the socks on the ground next to
me, hoping that they’ll dry some by the time the rain stops and I have to make
my way home. The footsteps get closer, and I look up to see a figure appearing
in front of me. He’s young, though still older than me; I’d say sixteen,
tops. There’s raindrops gleaming in his dark brown hair and slipping down his
cheeks, gathering behind long, full lashes. He carries his jacket over his arm,
so it’s not nearly as wet as mine. He’s wearing designer jeans and converse
sneakers with a grey V-neck top that fits him well; moulding to his wide
shoulders and muscled chest. Spotting me huddled into the wall, he produces an easy
smile. “Hi, I’m Jeremy,” he says. Jeremy seems to look me over and chuckle. Bedraggled
and wet, I must be quite a sight. I
smile back tightly " I don’t appreciate the laugh at my appearance " and tell
him my name is Anna. “Well, Anna, I think we’re going to be stuck here a while
together.” As much as I hated to admit it, he was right. The rain wasn’t
showing signs of letting up any time soon. I sigh, and Jeremy sits down next to
me. And I mean right next to me " our arms were pressed right up against each
other, though there had to have been at least another metre and a half of wall
on his other side. I wasn’t overly impressed with this; Jeremy seemed to come
off as over-confident and kind of obnoxious. I reminded myself that I’d only
learned the guy’s name thirty seconds ago, so maybe I shouldn’t be so quick to
judge. A little voice popped up, telling me that if I had only met him thirty
seconds ago, what was he doing invading my personal space? I wondered what his
first impression of me was. © 2012 RaspberryBulletsAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on June 30, 2012 Last Updated on June 30, 2012 AuthorRaspberryBulletsAustraliaAboutTo whomever may or may not be perusing my profile - Hi, I'm Saskia. I am relatively young, thin but not sporty, an avid reader of trashy novels and an enjoyer of horse-back riding. I can match .. more..Writing
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