Riot!

Riot!

A Poem by Phoenix Alleena

 

Riot!

 

This is for the people still oppressed

By the living situation under way

If you’re the one that’s stressed

I hope you stay, I hope you stay

 

We feel that life is hard out there,

Buried under bills to pay

If you’ve got all this in your hair

I hope you stay, I hope you stay

 

Where are these jobs supposedly found?

Minimum just can’t be the way

If you want the tyrant uncrowned,

I hope you stay, I hope you stay.

 

When we watch homes fall in succession

What else can we possibly say?

If you’re ready to fight a depression…

I hope you stay, I hope you stay

© 2008 Phoenix Alleena


Author's Note

Phoenix Alleena
I wrote this in economics, just because
I was bored-- and for once that class inspired me.
Who else is tired of hearing "We just don't have money for that..."!?

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At least economics class inspired something good! : ) This would be great metal lyrics!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I can completely relate to your frustration. It seems unfair that each succeeding generation is left with the failures of the previous, as well as ignorance of what truly matters outdoing their predecessors.

In making so many detailed laws and organized systems, it seems to me that we're slowly wrapping ourselves in chains that limit our imagination and dreams. You can't simply carry out a dream these days. And a person can't just start over with a new country. Even if a country was willing to sell some of their land, you'd need money, forms, registrations... We have so many rules to promote peace, yet they suppress our true selves.

Fascinating read. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


A good, timely write, Katie. A good topic for discussion - how your age group feels about the mess the adults in the government have made!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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