Creative Writing Class [1] 3 Tankas

Creative Writing Class [1] 3 Tankas

A Poem by Phoenix Alleena
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The first poetry dump of CW class <3

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    Drawing Class

I love the pencils,
even the crumpled papers.
I don't mind clogged air
filled with eraser shavings.
All of the Art is within.

 

Choir Testing

"I doubt one can sing

without breathing correctly.

It's all in your mind,

You really don't look silly!

Sing, and I'll give you your grades."

Wicca

A five-pointed star

and the mention of the earth.

It's all thatI know

That will take me down this path.

Don't judge for our differences.

© 2008 Phoenix Alleena


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Phoenix Alleena
Tell me what you think ^__^ <3

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I find in poetry it is great to drop the "and".



Love your work and love your spirit! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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