Deep deep down

My first ever piece of work published in a book of poetry. Written at the age of 12.

Deep Deep Down

Written at age 12

 

Deep deep down in the middle

of my heart lies a secret world.

In that secret world a cave stands

straight and proud. For in that secret cave

lie my achievements:

achievements I have earned,

achievements I have received.

 

In that secret cave a secret tunnel lies.

Pass through the secret tunnel

and see my secret waterfall.

My secret waterfall guards my dreams.

Dreams that are waiting to be freed.

 

Pass the secret waterfall

to my secret rainforest.

In my secret rainforest

live my favourite animals:

tigers, lions and macaws,

and whales and dolphins swim

playfully in my secret sea.

 

As yet no more of my secret world

has been discovered...

I can't wait to get there.

 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I felt a trip through the Amazon of love. Lovely imagery indeed...Bravo

[Ceejae]

I like this, it keeps me wondering about the world that you have created for yourself and for this to be written at 12, well wow

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Awesome write to be at the age of 12 years old! Awesome Katie:)

[Katie Nimmo]

Thank you very much.

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Your very welcome:)

[MAC]

12 seriously?? I am so jealous! I love this piece, has charm to it. lots of warmth and whole world ahead thing going on. nicely done Katie at age 12.

[Katie Nimmo]

Thanks :) found it in my mini library, when i read it i wonder why i didn't write more at that age x

[MAC]

well it isn't exactly the age you discover writing but hopefully you are making up for lost time :)

[Katie Nimmo]

yes i hope so, got loads of ideas rattling around it's just a case of piecing some together

[MAC]

or all of them and call it a novel :)