Galaxy

this is one of the very first poems I ever wrote--I wanted to make sure it was up here because it really is my all time favorite

hello starry eyes

galaxies surround you

outer space has found you

hold me down

don't let me drift away 

without you

don't let me wash away 

and drown you

you can't swim on your own

even if your eyes are made of 

oceans

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

A very nice sequence of surreal descriptions. I would to hear about the deeper meaning of this poem as I strangely feel that there is.