Among Men

On your next outward travel, scrutinize everything around. Note lunacy among men, the smell, the sound.
Behold with your own eyes, this worlds revamp to Hell. With no benevolence to govern, it seems just as well.
Camaraderie fabricating infrastructure for one to pillage, deceive and lie. Even seemingly sound minds, are out for a piece of the pie.
Falsification of higher beings with approval to harm or even kill and disappointedly enough, it's asserted as free will.
There's said still to be humanity, just waiting to be found but don't set prospect too high, for others live for your mockery the moment you're down.
Do we settle for desolation? Simply secure the strife? Be cautious of righteous decisions, it's a bitter sweet life!!

Reviews

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

I like it and there is a discipline in your writing and by far I could relate this to life.The imagery is nice and this poem preaches or it addresses someone who is close to heart but lost due to the waves. Nice prose poem ....................... Much Love n Respect ..sayed mudasir

[Kate H]

I'm most appreciative that you stopped by, read and reviewed my poem! Your observation is well noted. This is one that does subliminally speak to a someone who was dear to my heart. Point for you, sir!

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

So I got you on the spot and I believe then you are one of those rare women in the whole world. Pure souls are very rare these days and with this thinking you have occupied an space in my heart...............God bless you dear all the way.

[Kate H]

Thank you very much for your kind words!! You've no idea how much they're truly appreciated!!