Finally Free

- My earthly existence is over, God has called me home. Do not cry tears of sadness over me, for I am not alone. I'm with family and other loved ones, in which God has called upon too- I can rest assured you're alright because I'm always watching out for and looking over you.
- It was my time to part, He dealt me that card but where I am now, life is no longer hard. With no sadness and no tears about, only joyful smiles, this beautiful kingdom before me, it spans for miles!
- Beholding angels, sights and smells galore, this is my idea of Heaven and I'm ready to see more!
- Please don't cry tears of sorrow for me, I want you to know I'm happy here, I am finally free!!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

oh grief, we roll in, like the Tide it Hides, then a pin prick and it floods, and all around stare, streaks trace the face, brushed away back of my hand, back of my glove , Leather soaked world.

[Kate H]

Indeed- a lot of feelings to describe the grief of losing a loved one. Though it carries a sting and without prejudice, it's achievable to carry on, never as once was of course but none the less, carry on. Thank you lots for your input.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I found this to be a beautiful, uplifting, and hopeful write. Well done!

[Kate H]

Thank you very much! :)

[TL Boehm]

I have been told that sorrow is for the living and not the dead - that the dead are better off. This piece speaks to that - we grieve because we miss someone - and that someone may just be rejoicing. Well done

[Kate H]

Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this! The review? A bonus! Thank you, so very much!

[Sami Khalil]

Being free is one of the most fulfilling and rewarding sentiments ...I like how your poem has this element of darkness and freedom in it...Bravo

[Kate H]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....