- Feelings that come and go, yet catching a glimpse at last, these colors with eventual show and care spread out in vast.
- The words I love you uttered but no display at all, an easy shift now shuttered and soon will come the fall.
- Disregard in multicolored casings- trust now gone askew, realization of time now wasting, departure in plain view.
- Frowns and snarled lips upon somber, saddened faces. Eyes of vast emptiness with the yearning for familiar places.
- Bind of promise posed, now retreating to the past. Closeness of demise now showing, as this was sure to never last.
If i was to guess, I would ask if you once thought,
"Tell you I love you and you not hear me...
Is it my turn to totally understand.
To watch you walk out of my life and not do a damn thing...
If I have to give away...
The feeling that I feel.
If I have to sacrifice...
Oh, whatever babe, whatever baby.
If I have to take apart...
All that I am...
Is there anything that I would not do,
'Cause inside I'd die without you... "
is the real heart of the wording your pose.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
You're guess is very close but not quite. I actually wrote this piece some years back due to a falle.. read moreYou're guess is very close but not quite. I actually wrote this piece some years back due to a fallen out that I'd had with, who I thought at the time and for so long before, was a friend. Sad but true, the friendship didn't last as the grounds that it was based on were very obviously, false. The use of the line, " disregard in multicolored casings and trust now gone askew," represents the many faces presented and now, the lack of trust because of the fact. One cannot present multiple faces to an audience and expect people to remember who they are by face. These are picture painters.
If i was to guess, I would ask if you once thought,
"Tell you I love you and you not hear me...
Is it my turn to totally understand.
To watch you walk out of my life and not do a damn thing...
If I have to give away...
The feeling that I feel.
If I have to sacrifice...
Oh, whatever babe, whatever baby.
If I have to take apart...
All that I am...
Is there anything that I would not do,
'Cause inside I'd die without you... "
is the real heart of the wording your pose.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
You're guess is very close but not quite. I actually wrote this piece some years back due to a falle.. read moreYou're guess is very close but not quite. I actually wrote this piece some years back due to a fallen out that I'd had with, who I thought at the time and for so long before, was a friend. Sad but true, the friendship didn't last as the grounds that it was based on were very obviously, false. The use of the line, " disregard in multicolored casings and trust now gone askew," represents the many faces presented and now, the lack of trust because of the fact. One cannot present multiple faces to an audience and expect people to remember who they are by face. These are picture painters.
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