~Would You~

~Would You~

A Poem by Baby Girl Rock

Would you save me from the Devil's burning heart?
Would you pull me out of the endless pit of the underworld?
Would you take me in out of the cold, or leave me out there to die?
Would you lie and make me happy, or tell the truth and make me sad?
Would you help me when I needed you, or simply turn the other way?
Would you cry over my lifeless body, or be glad that I'm no longer around?
Would you forgive me for all my wrong doings, or hold a grudge on me forever?
Would you come to my rescue and save me, or leave me to die alone with no love?
Would you hold me close in your warm safe arms, or throw me out like I never mattered?
Would you kiss me one last time before I go, or spit in my face like I was nothing?
Would you let me be free for who I am, or hold me back from who I really am?
Would you leave me behind like an afterthought, or think of me everyday?
Would you tell me everything is okay, or say nothing is ever right?
Would you sweep me off my feet, or shove me done like a doll?
Would you make me feel special, or make me feel like nobody?
Would you love me for who I am, or hate me for what I'm not?
Would you save me from the Devil's burning heart?

© 2012 Baby Girl Rock


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A strong poem, really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes A very deep thought provoking write.
Something worth pondering over.
You write with depth, amazing write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very thought provoking. A lot of good questions here. Hopefully you find the answers you are looking for. Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Baby Girl Rock
Baby Girl Rock

White Sulphur Springs , WV



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Hey. My name is Katie and I live in West Virginia. I love to be with my friends and family... I love to read and write poems and short stories.. more..

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