Have You Ever Felt Darkness?

Have You Ever Felt Darkness?

A Poem by Katie Marie

Have you ever felt Darkness?
It surrounds you,
Like smoke,
Gagging you,
Blinding you,
Hiding you,
In its forever blackness.
You hate Darkness.
You love Darkness.
You try to pull away,
But you always come back,
To its forever blackness.
You need Darkness,
To be whole,
To be complete.
Without it you are cold.
Without it you are nothing.
Darkness is a part of us all.
No matter how hard we fight it,
We come back for it again.
So,

Have you ever felt Darkness?

© 2011 Katie Marie


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true, we all have a dark side :). and you captured the idea very well in this poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this one. I can feel it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well written. I love the darkness so times, but other times I hate it. I guess it depends.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. It describes so much feeling for something felt by so many. Top work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2011
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Katie Marie
Katie Marie

Hippyville, WI



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I was introduced to this site by a friend who is an amazing writer. Thank you to my friend Cheyenne. About my writing: I don't ever write poems that rhyme. (So, if those are the poems you like to .. more..

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