Into the Flames

As i look onto its face ,I see its strong incandescence

The scarlet tinted jealousy and the bright yellow anguish 

Gazing too much makes my eyes melt , as i feel its pain

Getting burn as it turns to smoke , such vigorous feelings of this flame

I dive in more , swimming on the edge of this flame 

The pain just a smokescreen to its rising waves 

Waves of this flame to rise above all this pain 

To show more just than the agony in it 

Concealed in pain , the real is in the invisible ,

Part of the flame burning with its shining spirit

Getting diffused into the air as it goes 

Look closely a friend suggested , as I did that 

Author's Note

Hope y'all like it !

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

There is passion in fire. I love looking into the fiery, blazing flames to feel the burn of heat on my cheeks. So much inspiration in fire. Thank you for reminding me with your words Kathy.

Chris

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

This review reminds me of camping trips bonfire , gathering round eating smores and enjoying and huddling together all warm and toasty . Thanks Chris for the review .. Appreciate it !!

[no tell writer]

dive in more , swimming on the edge of this flame
The pain just a smokescreen to its rising waves

LOVE THIS part, this is quite an emotional read, so well expressed.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Thanks Katzie , thanks for dropping by