Feeling

Feeling

A Poem by Kathrine
"

If you are alone in a dark and you miss soebody, then look behind and wisper the words of your heart...

"

The night is dark,

And lights are off.

I wish you here,

My darkness ghost.

 

I love you eyes,

What once had seen.

I wish like hell,

That you choose me.

 

But life is short,

And death is cruel.


And blood will flow

Without my word.


And you will be gone

To another world.

I miss you much

My lovely ghost

But all what’s left

Is just a dust.

 

© 2012 Kathrine


Author's Note

Kathrine
I think I fell in love with poetry :)
I would like a second oppinion for that, please!
Thank you!

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yeh, i can believe you that you're really in Love... lol i've read your poems and they're all about Love too...you're a great writer and i think you love writing writes on those one's whose genre's Love/Romance...that's what i found. You love from Nature too it seemed from your wallpic..lol and you love from your life too as well it seemed from your writes.

This write again forces me to read your some more great writes. Here, every stanza's awesome and brightly penned with colors... Beautiful work once again :)
Keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspiring Writer

11 Years Ago

Your welcome dear "Kathrine" (Nice Name by the way) :P
Yeh, i just found the same you love too.. read more
Kathrine

11 Years Ago

Thank You. You words are kind! x
Inspiring Writer

11 Years Ago

Your welcome!
You're too kind too :)



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yeh, i can believe you that you're really in Love... lol i've read your poems and they're all about Love too...you're a great writer and i think you love writing writes on those one's whose genre's Love/Romance...that's what i found. You love from Nature too it seemed from your wallpic..lol and you love from your life too as well it seemed from your writes.

This write again forces me to read your some more great writes. Here, every stanza's awesome and brightly penned with colors... Beautiful work once again :)
Keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspiring Writer

11 Years Ago

Your welcome dear "Kathrine" (Nice Name by the way) :P
Yeh, i just found the same you love too.. read more
Kathrine

11 Years Ago

Thank You. You words are kind! x
Inspiring Writer

11 Years Ago

Your welcome!
You're too kind too :)
no idea what it means but it flows so well and is very intriguing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kathrine

12 Years Ago

thank you
verrrry creepy

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kathrine

12 Years Ago

Thats why i kicked it out of my head :) lol
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

lol
It's pretty and heartfelt. Don't mistake anything I say after this for cruelty: I don't really know why there are random words highlighted and line 8 needs review- "that you choose>chose" =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kathrine

11 Years Ago

the highlights are just random really. thank you for the review

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Added on September 25, 2012
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Kathrine
Kathrine

Torpoint, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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