Feeling

If you are alone in a dark and you miss soebody, then look behind and wisper the words of your heart...

The night is dark,

And lights are off.

I wish you here,

My darkness ghost.

 

I love you eyes,

What once had seen.

I wish like hell,

That you choose me.

 

But life is short,

And death is cruel.

And blood will flow

Without my word.

And you will be gone

To another world.

I miss you much

My lovely ghost

But all what’s left

Is just a dust.

 

Author's Note

I think I fell in love with poetry :)
I would like a second oppinion for that, please!
Thank you!

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

yeh, i can believe you that you're really in Love... lol i've read your poems and they're all about Love too...you're a great writer and i think you love writing writes on those one's whose genre's Love/Romance...that's what i found. You love from Nature too it seemed from your wallpic..lol and you love from your life too as well it seemed from your writes.

This write again forces me to read your some more great writes. Here, every stanza's awesome and brightly penned with colors... Beautiful work once again :)
Keep writing :)

[Kathrine]

Thank you very much.
well i am in love indeed with my fiance so he is one of the inspirations for me. i love nature very much and i like writing when i am outside, but English weather is not always kind so for sake of my laptop i stay in the garden :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome dear "Kathrine" (Nice Name by the way) :P
Yeh, i just found the same you love too much that all... Ohh, really, You've a fiance, that's great...
so, i'd love to say, Happy Married Life Dear "Kathrine" :) Hope he too love you damn much as you do.
Hahahah, well said, you made me smiley ... lol yeh, i know, in the garden, its too hard to keep your eyes on lappy screen cuz, weather never allow you to keep your eyes on there but it wants you to keep you Blueish eyes In the Blue Sky than the screenn... LOL HAHAH :)

[Kathrine]

Thank You. You words are kind! x

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome!
You're too kind too :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

no idea what it means but it flows so well and is very intriguing

[Kathrine]

thank you

[Steven Cash]

verrrry creepy

[Kathrine]

Thats why i kicked it out of my head :) lol

[Steven Cash]

lol

[Kenaz]

It's pretty and heartfelt. Don't mistake anything I say after this for cruelty: I don't really know why there are random words highlighted and line 8 needs review- "that you choose>chose" =)

[Kathrine]

the highlights are just random really. thank you for the review