Time

Something what came in my mind when I was working and thoght about my partner :) love him a lot.xxx

This night is ours

So stay with me.

The moon is mine

But I share with you.

My lips are yours

Your body is mine.

And all we have

Is our time....

Author's Note

Just say what you think...

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Well, ok, let me say what i want to say
The moon is mine
But I share with you.... 100 marks for this piece, you've well said about this piece, Well, i think you know very well, how utilizing the Time.. lol That's a great write, you've a passion to write.. to read and of course spending the time tht's worth of and in your life. Your coloring's too great and awesome and nicely colored.
Very powerful and a strong write, it's totally heartfelt write. Liked your work :)

[zainul]

You thought your partner staying closed to you though he was away.
Lovely presentation of love and passion.

[Kathrine]

thank you

[zainul]

You are welcome

[Kenaz]

The last two lines/stanzas to rhyme while the first two do not? Hmm, I still like it though, for its simplicity.

[Kathrine]

Thank You very much

[Cynthia Man]

I like it a lot, it've such strong emotions :)
It's short but definitely sweet and powerful!
Great Write!

[Kathrine]

Thank you
it means a lot for me as well, because i wrote it when i was alone working and my partner was away so i missed him so much.
i am happy you like it:)

[Steven Cash]

i think it's interesting

[Kathrine]

intresting?