Going

I knew there have to be some poetry inside me...:)

I close my eyes that very dark night

And tune my ears to listen.

I can hear you coming over the water

To take me away tonight.

But, yet, I am scared

To leave myself behind.

If life would be easy

Then I could leave with peace in my mind....

Author's Note

I would like to know if this is something or am i usless with poetry :)
Thank You

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Hahah, No .. No.. "kathrine'', you're not Useless... :) I liked this write much even i liked these last lines much
If life would be easy
Then I could leave with peace in my mind....Incredibly penn'd. Iit's a true piece yu've posted here in on this site. It's showed your Imaginary tht's well expressed here. Nice work, i wanna read your some more nice writes...right now :)

[Kathrine]

i am more like roman writer, but sometimes i have my moments with poetry :) i like you like it. thank you

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome!
May i ask, Are you from Rome ?

[Kathrine]

No, i am originally from Estonia, but I live in England now.

[Inspiring Writer]

oH, I C.. wow, that's great, well, England you meant In London ?

[Kathrine]

i am actually living in Cornwall. its shout-west coast of England. very beautiful sea village :) very good inspiration.

[Inspiring Writer]

WOW, that's sound great to me expecailly because i always wished to be there one day :)

[Kathrine]

Sometimes wishes can come true when you wish very much! mine did!

[Inspiring Writer]

Haha :) yeh, i hope so :)
That's great too, you've got your wishes :) Hope yu'd a great wishes and you're enjoying with them your life :) I think you're a very lovely and a happy one :)

[Kathrine]

And you know how to make people smile :) My happiness is people who are important to me and the sunshine above my head and the stories i write :)

[Inspiring Writer]

:)
And My Happiness's you all such kinda nice People who're nice and always stay nice :)
thanks for being nice with me dear :)

Yeh, sunshine's great and even it's important to our Bones.. lol as well said by me for you :)
sunshine's above the head, it covers me like a shed,
layers provide reliefs and boils our head,
when sunrises and shines in the sky, our mind say, i need some more sleep on bed,
Before you go for a walk and i put your breakast on a table of flowery shade. :)

[Kathrine]

it such a pleasure to speak with people who are nice and make you smile. speaking with good people, like you, make things go well and smooth and the day/night will feel better :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Haha :) Oh, wow, that's a nice and a beautiful Compliment... :)
well, you well said, it's totally true, the day, the night, the fall and the bright in all and the every season, whatever we do and whoever we meet with if they seem good and very good, we feel better and makes our day more good with them like making frnds, who share all kinda joy, all kinda sorrow and who keep faith towards his/her frnds :)

[Kathrine]

well said indeed :)

[Syphx]

i like it

[Kathrine]

thank you

[Steven Cash]

This is Urban Legend material

"Lady on the Water" or something

like a ghost coming to take the life of someone who has walked the bank of the river

[Kathrine]

Thank you

[Kaylor Mason]

I say . . . this is definitely something! It's good poetry. Poetry is exactly like sketching or painting--if it comes from within you, then it's always good, and no one can say differently. Anyway, I especially like the last line--life is never easy, unfortunately (at least I've never met anyone with an easy life)

[Kathrine]

Thank You. i feel now that maybe i have something to wite not only stories but poetry as well.

[cevance]

If it pleases you, how could it be useless? It says what you want it to say--and I like what you say.

[Kathrine]

well i have never really write any poems and always tought i am not good enough. but thank you.