Loss

Loss

A Poem by Silver_water_dragon

This world has flipped...

Unrecognizable...

Strange...

A dull color has set the scene

Feet seem too led filled to move forward

--

Forced into this change

Unsure how to act now...

How to feel...

Left to figure this out on my own

--

Darkness once again taps on the shoulder

Body chills sink deep to the bones

Nothing but a piercing emptiness behind

And all around...

Brutal and frigid...

--

This world is forever opaque

Solitary, bleak, ashen...

An obscure void that once had life

Left ghostly images of what was

Of what was lost in this time

--

Heavy feet trudge forward

Unsurity clings

One step...

Deep breath...

One step...

Deep breath...

Move on... because you have to

Keep going... because it's what she would want

Hope that this world will one day brighten..

© 2014 Silver_water_dragon


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I love this piece, and I am pretty sure I know what its about. Eloquently explains the loss, confusion, solitude and the need to persevere. Love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Thank You. If You Want To Know What My Poetry Is About You Can Always Ask. And My Phone Is Using Cap.. read more

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Added on February 27, 2014
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Silver_water_dragon

Nowhere, TN



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Writing has always been my passion. Poetry, short stories, novels. I hope to grow in my skill and be published more..

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