rain
A Poem by
K.
quick little write about the weather
slowly slipping silver
it waltzes down the pane
a pitter patter pompous march
the dances of the rain
© 2013 K.
Reviews
So emotional! you drew a really marvelous realistic picture there with 4 lines!
So immpressive!
Like it much!
Posted 11 Years Ago
wannna u make it , it's all about a packet,
fly with a rocket, there'll be a socket,
if u had a control, then how u can make it,
this is a time to play the game...........bring-it.........
Posted 11 Years Ago
wannna u make it , it's all about a packet,
fly with a rocket, there'll be a socket,
if u had a control, then how u can make it,
this is a time to play the game...........bring-it.........
rain .........rain.......now time to play the game.......
Posted 11 Years Ago
rain .........rain.......now time to play the game.......
i like the description of rain as silver, duh, i never thought about that before.. theres something comforting about being in a shelter when its raining outside.. like a tent or a cave or simply a house by the window, writing down how it inspires you..
very well done
Antonio
Posted 11 Years Ago
i like the description of rain as silver, duh, i never thought about that before.. theres something comforting about being in a shelter when its raining outside.. like a tent or a cave or simply a house by the window, writing down how it inspires you..
very well done
Antonio
rain
rain
go
away
and
brush
the
lilacs
like
yes
no
i
will
have
retribution.
I am
Edward Norton,
and Daniel Day Lewis
Posted 11 Years Ago
rain
rain
go
away
and
brush
the
lilacs
like
yes
no
i
will
have
retribution.
I am
Edward Norton,
and Daniel Day Lewis
simply perfect!!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
simply perfect!!!!
beautiful in its simplicity
Posted 11 Years Ago
beautiful in its simplicity
Its great! Short and wonderous! :) Love it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Its great! Short and wonderous! :) Love it!
nice...may be u should have to more elaborate it.....i meant continue it...
Posted 11 Years Ago
nice...may be u should have to more elaborate it.....i meant continue it...
Beautiful ! I love the rain and your words give it a remarkable beauty that one can truely admire .
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful ! I love the rain and your words give it a remarkable beauty that one can truely admire .
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Added on January 7, 2013
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K. VT
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