rain

quick little write about the weather

slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

Fun.. short and simple, but so descriptive and true :) Well done!

[zainul]

Love lovely painting.
Rain enjoys dancing!

[Chris]

It's interesting having our thoughts analyzed... the word choice we use. Ever wonder about the kind of couch a thought must lay on? Do they have to make counselling appointments? Follow-ups? And if they DO change - do they still exist to be remembered?

I liked your take on the rain - reminded me quiet days.

[Joe]

Yeah I Love The Music Of It, Kat! :)

Fav Lines:

"a pitter patter pompous march
the dances of the rain"

Lovely Pen! :)

[K.]

kate*
thankyou!

[B-poet]

Very unique and intriguing. Love the choice of words you used to create this poem. Great work. :)

[John]

This could be a right up there with "rain, rain, go away," a hundred years from now! I couldn't help but put a musical melody to the words.

[my crazylife]

lovly

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I love the rain. This little verse captures that exquisite strut down the pane quite nicely.

Well said.

[Everett DeValle]

Like lovers making love,
painted and framed,
I hear it softly roar,
a drumming, that can not be tamed...

Lovely write, Katherine, I wish it could be longer, but the description and metaphor was wonderful, nevertheless.

~Ev

[MAC]

quick? this is brilliant!