rain

quick little write about the weather

slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

Reviews

[Relic]

I love the alliteration. Rain is a favorite subject for poets and this is a perfect offering for the reader interested in imagery. Excellent.

[Neon]

What a great cold piece of your artistry. I enjoyed the beauty of the poem. Very nice work... It's an adorable poem.

[Germany Rose]

Simple and well composed.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Looks like your already changing the world:) Great write:)

[Melanie Genevieve]

ahhh I love this! I especially love the pitter patter! It's such a great sound! I have a poem called rain where I also use 'pitter patter'. This is lovely. Oh how I love the rain

[Vile]

Lolvely way to view rain, I like the way this is worded. It's...sweet. :D

[Vile]

Lovely** damn typos.

[Lucien Maier]

nicely done. It has a good flow. Bit short.

[Dr. Wood ?]

says it all

Pompous is good

No-one tells the RAIN what to do

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Good use of imagination for descriptions on this. Well done.