rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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I love the alliteration. Rain is a favorite subject for poets and this is a perfect offering for the reader interested in imagery. Excellent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a great cold piece of your artistry. I enjoyed the beauty of the poem. Very nice work... It's an adorable poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simple and well composed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Looks like your already changing the world:) Great write:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


ahhh I love this! I especially love the pitter patter! It's such a great sound! I have a poem called rain where I also use 'pitter patter'. This is lovely. Oh how I love the rain

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lolvely way to view rain, I like the way this is worded. It's...sweet. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vile

11 Years Ago

Lovely** damn typos.
nicely done. It has a good flow. Bit short.

Posted 11 Years Ago


says it all

Pompous is good

No-one tells the RAIN what to do

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good use of imagination for descriptions on this. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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