Love

The love you once loved

no longer felt

the love you want

besides of hope

love is no hope from who we are

to who we become

desgin a life will not be one

hopeing of love will not be loved

live laugh love are the ways of life

greed will not overcome but givness will

You cant change the world intill you can change yourself

happiness is love

love is happiness, love will become one.

 

 

The love you once loved

no longer felt

the love you want

besides of hope

love is no hope from who we are

to who we become

desgin a life will not be one

hopeing of love will not be loved

live laugh love are the ways of life

greed will not overcome but givness will

You cant change the world intill you can change yourself

happiness is love

love is happiness, love will become one.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I think there may be too much written of
love and too little loving.
Nice poem , make it into an action movie.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Walani Ndhlovu]

Powerful message in the poem. I mostly liked your saying that "you cant change the world intil you you can change yourself". That was beautiful

[Just Another Writer]

I really love this and the message it carries! I can definitely relate. :3 awesome job!

[Kate Ruta]

Thanks

[Brandon Crawford]

This is Good I hope to enjoy more of you poets for does not see love has something more then what it really is

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem with positivity flavor and a good message. Thank you for sharing...:)