Burning

Vibrant light 

Piercing through skin 

Let the burning begin 

Reviews

[Steve L.]

Amazing how much feeling you can put into three lines!! Great damn work!!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Small BUT speaks so much! Powerful write that many can relate to!

[Kate Henderson]

Thank you very much for your kind words :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!

[I Am Svetlana]

I've gone through this phase too, sadly, but only a couple of times. It was very similar to cutting, but in a way, something in it held more power.

[Aethereal]

Yes, light may interact with our bodies in mysterious ways. I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you.

Sprite

Emptiness within
our bones, flesh and skin
may contain a sprite
in the form of light
that flies when we die
up above the sky.

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I see this as the alien death ray that comes out from nowhere and cooks the catch before beam up! =D

Cute little poem!

[Kate Henderson]

Hey! Thank you for your review, so glad you enjoyed my work! :)

[Blogger]

Thank you for allowing your readers to use their imaginations in this write. That is a nice change.

[Kate Henderson]

You're welcome. Thank you for your review, glad you liked it :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Sounds good!! The poem having many ways to get interpreted by the reader but I think, this`s about gratifying feelings of love. Nice theme. I like you chosen simple words to express your "Vibrant" feelings. Keep it up!! ;)

[Kate Henderson]

Hey, thank you for your kind words, I'm really glad you enjoyed this piece. Simple yet effective I think :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Hey, your welcome. Yeah... it's just simple & much effective even what I think is that whatever you write or come up with is always seemed much effective & enjoyable to read to me & I really admire it. Your awesome, Kate ;)

[Kate Henderson]

Thank you once again. You are too kind... Thanks for taking the time to read my stuff :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Ah! you so sweet, sweetheart. I even love taking my time to devote it all in your beautiful stuffs, your stuffs speak right to the core of my heart .. (to my heart burn with the flames of "BURNING") .. (smile)