Eye Of The Sun

The winds of time 

Can break 

Force itself through the trees 

For the destruction of 

Mankind is imminent

Masking enchantment 

The Sun hides its 

Deadly sins 

As we go on oblivious 

To its all seeing eye 

One false move and 

Earth could die 

The Sun watches our every step 

It weathers our wounds 

With a painful blow 

Leaving us homeless 

With nowhere to go  

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

The sun's watching us everytime as A GOD 's watching us or our every footprints what we do in our life everything's being recording in the book of the sun and in the folder of the God's tablet. Today we hurt someone but tom. we got some hurt this's what... !! "AN EYE OF THE GOD" that's keep watching us everytime.
I liked your tittle too that's great and i can compare that one in real life with it's all life's activities. Great job!