Monologue of a lonely girl

A short piece written from the perspective of a lonely teenage girl.

Ever since I can remember I have been in love with love and fascinated by fairytale romances. Snow White, Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty. Happy endings and Prince Charming. I pray for the day when a handsome knight in shining armour climbs through my window and gives me that "love at first sight feeling". I dream of the man who holds my heart with comfort, heals my suffering and makes me feel safe. I want an epic romance that I've see in movies, however I seem  to attract mediocre frogs and heart breakers in a Prince's disguise. If only I was Cinderella, I would have a fairy godmother. (And if it didn't work out I'd have a beautiful pair of shoes.)  But no matter how long my wait may be, no matter how many times I get injured in the battlefield  of romance, I still believe that their is a person out there that I am destined to be with. Someone who I already belong to and always will. For everyone has a soul mate, whether we meet them  in this life or another. It is our fate. And  when they do, you're set free, like two white doves at a wedding ceremony. So my Prince where ever you may be, my promise is to never quit my quest to find you. We will meet someday. <3 

Reviews

[Pax]

a beautiful soul looking for someone to love. its hard to fail, but its part of life to fail and learn from them. yes, love is hard to fine, fairytale makes us dream of something wonderful, dreams we love in our fantasies. we just hope that our fantasies are as easy as in reality. a well written piece, well done.

[Jordan's Back]

Nice story

[Hiddenfire]

Such is the fate that befalls us all before true romance. The point as described so perfectly within this little short is to: "never quit my quest to find you." and most assuredly some day you will.

[Jack Isaac]

Yes, for everone out there is a "connection"... not the cheezy pick-up-line kind of connection but a deep inner feeling that draws one into a fairytale, and somehow in that, the soul teaches a lesson in "Homing of the Hearts." Like birds that migrate solely by instinct, the heart seems to know where it's going... Listen to it... don't let the noise and chaos of society drown it out... that's what this story says to me. Nice bit of inspiraion here! Thanks for sharing.

[josh]

"Many people need desperately to receive this message: 'I feel and think much as you do, care about many of the things you care about, although most people do not care about them. You are not alone.'" -- Timequake, by Kurt Vonnegut

Everyone feels that way about true love. However, you contradicted yourself: Snow White, et al, merely waited for love to come along, and you said you are on a quest. My advice: pick better role models. Be a new kind of princess. When you set yourself apart from all those other girls in pretty pink dresses, that special guy is bound to take notice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love should be kind and wonderful. My grandparent were marry 65 years. He would walk to the corner market and buy her her daily treats. His life was her happiness and smile. Many kind of prince in the world. A wise woman choices with patience and time a worthy prince. I like the complete story and the strong ending. A excellent story.
Coyote

[Chris Yip]

You will meet the right man one day and you will know it is him when you get to know him. How he treats others who low in society will tell what kind of man he is. I wish all the best for you.

[Chima]

good poem and i love your outfit its beautiful

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful write of hope.