Chains or Wonderland?

Spider fangs, a faceful of knives, you leave me drowning in my sea of self-deceit,

Stumbling through tunnels of mirrors and light, delusions look good from this fallen angel's

Angle; bitter overdoses, filthy hands and broken wings, get your demons out of my

Wonderland.

 

 

Hey Alice, break your chains and join the fallen, we're not all that bad,

Sadly discarded, rotting personas;

Shrug away your princess mask.

 

 

The halo snapped in half the day the downpour fed your

Poison tongues; you Eve, you serpent, I don't need saving from myself,

I don't want to let you in, don't lose yourself

In my mind.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

what a wonderful ride...as all rides for me are wonderful who owns a car with a bent frame. So
you steer on an angle to keep the thing on the road...."Shrug away your princess mask" you ask.
JOin the rest of us in this delusional wonderland, where the things you count on, wings, hands,
angels get accustomed to our human needs...

I like this,
like it very much.
dana

[Rob Santana]

This is twisted. I love this. "the halo snapped in half" clever/creative choice of words. Always look forward to reading your work Kat. Congrats on your self published work.

[KatDarkness]

Thanks Creeper, I really appreciate your review :)