My Unborn Dream

Dreaming of the sweet breath of baby yet to be.

I wait with bated breath
A sigh upon the whispering breeze
Lifting a tiny seed of hope.
You are cradled inside me
Nestled between my heart and desire.
A longing to feel, to breathe, to taste, to smell...
Your heartbeat thudding in my breast.
A mirage of vaporing tendrils
Wavering in the muted distance
Misty smoke visions unyet seen.
I bear the weight of your siren call
Beckoning with your imagined baby blues.
A ghost of things to be
My unborn dream.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[I am Nelly]

Achingly beautiful, full of longing and hope. Brilliant as always Miss Kat

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautiful

[Lily Mae]

I had that same dream.. until one day after 15 years it became a reality.. Just one but one is more I ever thought I'd know.. You captured the feelings and emotions that go along with the ghost of things to be ...perfectly..xo

[EMF]

Some RR you open straight away. They go to the top of the list. Why? Because they are this good. You know how skilled a writer I think you are, as well as a superb creative artist available for hire, in both respects... (just a little plug). But this one... This is beyond gorgeous. such beauty and warmth. Not sentimentalism, but pure love. Exceptional. A master class in how it should be done

[zero binty]

Motherhood and pregnancy are both beautiful things. Thank God I have testes, because I can guarantee I'd mess that up. Amazing beautiful write.

[Roberta]

My word! This is gorgeous! I have the biggest smile on my face, this is such an adorable read ^.^

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I can't help but smile reading this... full of faith and love.