Tortured Sorrow Born of Jealousy

Tortured Sorrow Born of Jealousy

A Poem by Kat Collins
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“Cruelty has a human heart, And jealousy a human face Terror, the human form divine, And secrecy, the human dress” - William Blake

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I’ve made my concessions.

I’ve given all that I can.

 

You ask for my soul,

Laid bare and exposed,

To your every whim.

 

Vultures are circling,

My death is impending.

 

Body is spread-eagled,

Lying prone on chiseled stone.

 

Leather restraints chaffing,

Peeling my skin raw.

 

My heart pumps sluggishly,

With every searing breath.

 

I shutter my eyes,

Against the misery.

 

Your cackling sends shivers,

Up and down my cracked spine.

 

I’ve made my concessions.

I’ve given all that I can.

 

You screech for my lifeblood,

Darkened black and putrid,

From your poison.

 

The cold seeps,

Into my bones.

 

Upon this unforgiving rock,

I cry out for mercy.

 

Your spiraling jealousy,

Knows no bounds.

 

Spitting and sputtering,

Spewing your filth forth.

 

I turn the other cheek,

Only to feel the burn.

 

I’ve made my concessions.

I’ve given all that I can.

 

How can I confess

When I’ve done

Nothing wrong?

© 2011 Kat Collins


Author's Note

Kat Collins
Image - http://fineartamerica.com/featured/jealousy-paula-andrea-pyle.html

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I can feel the pain in every word of this write.. Being picked apart and discarded piece by piece is the worst experience.. I have experienced it and witnessed it to many times.. You know the simple truth and communication makes life so much easier...instead we live with jealousy and pain... excellent write.. xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A jealous person is much like a drunk.
Neither will ever change.
"They are both so wrapped up in
themselves that you are invisible to them.
This was an excellent treatise on jealousy.
Run , don`t walk to the nearest exit, then
open the door and never look back.
Why should you donate your life to a
hopless lunatic.

----- EAgle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel the pain in every word of this write.. Being picked apart and discarded piece by piece is the worst experience.. I have experienced it and witnessed it to many times.. You know the simple truth and communication makes life so much easier...instead we live with jealousy and pain... excellent write.. xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kat, you never fail to take my breath away or shift me into another place. I loved it, with it's overtones of classical mythology. On a scale of 1 -100? Make it 1,000.

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Kat Collins
Kat Collins

Allentown, PA



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I'm a writer, freelance web designer, and voracious reader. I'm a collector of words, experiences, and emotions. I've been writing since I was "knee-high to a grasshopper" and feel lost without it. Wr.. more..

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