Ocean's Lure

A tribute to the ocean...

Speak to me with your salted breath,

Smelling of fish and brine.

Crash into me with your waves of passion,

Swirling eddys and ripping tides.

Foaming at the mouth,

Lapping at the shores,

Icy cold and heated depths.

Bring me to my knees in worship,

Obliterating and consuming.

Whisper tendrils upon my heart,

Beckoning curls and aqua fathoms.

Shivering and sweating,

Waiting with bated breath,

Luring with your siren call.

Caress me with your wet lips,

Tasting of bitter sweetness.

Envelop me in your liquid warmth,

Seeping into my pores.

Breathing deep,

Sucking you in,

My essence is melting into you.

 

Author's Note

Feel free....

Image - http://www.naturephotoblog.com/index.php?showimage=16

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

As a Brit and a nation of fishermen and sailors I feel we all feel an Ifinity to the sea and this heart outpouring of love for the majesty of her beauty speaks directly to the inner soul of man. Beautifully penned my friend, keep em' coming

Waiting with bated breath,
Luring with your siren call.
Caress me with your wet lips,
Tasting of bitter sweetness.

Almost sounds like a sensual poem to a man does it not?

[Chris]

thought-full and heated. You have a way af generating heat.

[rose with love]

this is marked with intense feelings, brilliant

"Caress me with your wet lips,
Tasting of bitter sweetness.
Envelop me in your liquid warmth,
Seeping into my pores.
Breathing deep,
Sucking you in,
My essence is melting into you"
I love those verses , very passionate

[EMF]

Stunning. Simply stunning. Sultry, erotic, crashing language that draws you in and down to the ocean itself. Poetry as it should be.

[Lily Mae]

"My essence is melting into you." perfect.. xx

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

This is really beautiful, and very elemental