Life

About life

In a world filled with changes

each and every day..

Taking in all Gods' glory

At every single chance.

We were put on this planet

To live and to love.

Friends come and go

Life flies by right before your eyes.

You ignore the wonders

that you cherished as a child

Wishing you could go back

and revisit all the small things.

We go on with life..

We finish school, fall in love,

have kids.

Then when our time has come to an end,

We are nothing but an invisible memory.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Perfect poem! I love this, yeah, in the life, kids become child, child becomes young then old ... but all activities we do in the life are counted. We finish school, colleges, fall in love, have sex and lust all days and all nights to feel the passionate power the fire of warmth of bodies burning the souls into heat. Every day we wish to have love, life and lust because there's very few ones who treat lust right ... those who don't treat the love right, they always live their every day with pain and sadness and the reason of our pain comes form our activities we do but what's a worth of it? Nothing, because one day we all go die then whether we have lust or not, whether we live with smile or not, whether we hate or love and whether we keep angels in the depth of the heart or under the foot but before we go die, everybody wants living lives with happiness and happiness can come from love. A love which should be make with the fragrance of an every drop of love that's get consumed by us every day all nights. It's a lovely poem that's touched my heart.

Keep on!

[maria ( rose)]

ahh,, I do like your poem about ''Life''.
Taking in all Gods' glory♥ I take it all in,, every single day.
Embrace it all and give thanks to the man upstairs. Thank You so much for sharing this wonderful poem.
-maria rose

[Jewel Chanda]

an excellent one.. we certainly wish to go back to our childhood days... I wish if I could go back to school... I liked the most "we are nothing but invisible memory" ... really a nice.. poem.