Death

Death

A Poem by CommonHeartCure
"

Just a song I came up with a long time ago.I guess you can call it "Emo".Whatever suits you.^_^

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Death Lyrics by CommonHeartCure

How many times do I have to go on like this!

How many times do I have to behave like this!

And,

How many times do I have to be Angry like this!

It's not a question of morals,

Or life and Death!

It's not a question of how things will happen next.

Oh,power was something that I wanted bad,

And physics was a grim reminder of that.

Something inside me .

Tore in two.

A piece,a hole,from inside my chest,

It grew.

Jelousy,Tyranny,Blood seeping scars.

It's not a question of morals,

Or life and Death!

It's not a question of how things will happen next.

How many times do I have to go on like this!

And,

How many times do I have to behave like this!

My feet were sore from gravel burns.

The rug got so filthy,

Soaked in glass.

My first window broke in half,

Cracked and smashed.

It's Not a matter of how things got like this.

It's not a show of how she called for death .

How many times do I have to go on like this!

How many times do I have to behave like this!

And,

How many times do I have to be Angry like this!

It's not a question of morals,

Or life and Death!

It's not a question of how things will happen next.

It's not a question of how things will happen next.

It's not a question of how things will happen next.

It's not a question of how things will end like this.

© 2009 CommonHeartCure


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This is a hardcore song! I usually don't use words like that, but it describes how I see this song perfectly. It's such a good write; you really have talent as a song writer. The only improvement I can see is putting spaces between the different verses. That makes it easier to read. Besides that, though, it is terrific!



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a hardcore song! I usually don't use words like that, but it describes how I see this song perfectly. It's such a good write; you really have talent as a song writer. The only improvement I can see is putting spaces between the different verses. That makes it easier to read. Besides that, though, it is terrific!



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome song lyrics! If this was made into a real song, it would be totally awesome! Just from reading this, I could see that it had a lot of emotion in it! Great song lyrics!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 28, 2009

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