DR JEKYL & MS HYDEA Story by Karl HerzogA boy struggling to pass his high school exams turns to chemistry to make him smarter. He makes an elixir, drinks but has very different results.chapter 1:
the boardgame operation is a poor substitute for a
medical school tutorial
“That’s it,
I’m sick of being dumb.”
The
frustrated sixteen-year-old Charles Jekyll bashed both chubby fists on his
cleared computer desk.
‘This year
I’m going to ace school and then one day I will be a Doctor.’
Charles
Jekyll declared his resolution as this was the final year of High School.
Charles always wanted to be a doctor. He was told what subjects to study, how
to study, received tutoring but failing miserably.
‘I’m going
to start putting the extra effort in beginning with…’
Charles
looked around the cluttered corners of his bedroom until he jumped up and
pulled a box from the mess of his opened closet.
….this
board game of Operation!’
This was
how Charles as going to spend his Friday after school, tutoring himself with a board
game which turned out to be futile.
‘Bloody
hell, I can’t even win this game! Oh
well, the break did me some good and I’ll ace the quiz in my biology textbook.’
Feeling
confident, Charles completed the quiz but failed again.
‘What!? Fifty-eight percent!! That’s not even a pass…I feel retarded.’
He slumped
into his comfy desk chair, body limp with devastation, unable to move except
for pivoting to his right, facing the bedroom window above his bed. The sun had gone down long ago, it was well
into the evening. Orange street lights were shinning onto the leaves of the gum
trees that lined the suburban footpath of his family’s front yard. Charles’s eyes looked down to the right where
a coffee table, littered with a Chemistry set, wedged between the bed and the only part of
the double door closet that cold close.
‘My
chemistry set…maybe I could mix a tonic that would make me smarter…more
intelligent.’
The thought
was enough to give Charles Jekyll a jolt, light bulb of his messy room shinning
above his head illuminating his bright idea like in a Warner Brothers cartoon.
He jumped up from his chair and shuffled quickly in and out of his room, desk
chair still spinning. From the fridge in the kitchen to the chemistry set in
his bedroom, Charles started laying out his tools and ingredients on the short,
black coffee table.
‘Almond
milk for intelligence…’
Charles had
no idea why his parents brought Almond milk, none of them drank it and it
always expired.
‘…never
mind, I’ll buy a replacement.’
He poured a
portion of almond milk in a flask along with half a cup of coffee.
‘The caffeine
to stimulate the brain.’
Adding
other ingredients from his chemistry set, Charles Jekyll swirled the light
brown concoction in the glass flask. Holding it up to the light of the battered
room, revealing fist sized dents in the wall from years of frustration. Charles hesitated, staring at the drink that
was almost green.
“This has
to work…”
In
desperation, he poured the warm drink down his throat, swallowed, staggered
backwards falling into his desk hair, dropped the flask on a floor covered in
test papers marked with ‘-D’ and passed out.
Chapter 2:
By day I’m a school boy,
by night I’m a Gothic, Tom-boy, Drag Queen
Saturday
morning, Charles woke up feeling tired and soar.
‘Errrrrr, I
feel like I spent yesterday competing in a Sports Carnival. Why is that?
Wait a minute…’
Charles
threw off his blanket and saw what he was wearing, Bat Man briefs and a black
sports bra.
“What
the…!?”
Charles sat
bolt up-right in his bed, staring down at his sudden new look. He looked around his bedroom to see a
scattered trail of clothing leading from his bed. It consisted of a black tank top with the
picture of a roller-skating zombie women, a black leather studded belt, blue
denim shorts and a pair of black Vans sneakers.
The trail ended with a skateboard leaning up against his closet door.
“…since
when did I ride a skateboard?”
Charles
stood up now, struggling to balance his aching body, staring at the trail of
clothing that wasn’t his style.
The day
proceeded with Charles trying to continue with his normal routine. He wasted his Saturday trying to catch up on
study and Saturday night using his Tonic as a side project and so he kept a
video diary. Ignoring
his previous experience, Charles mixed the tonic, writing down in a journal the
ingredients with the digital camera on a small tripod atop of his desk filming
him writing and mixing the ingredients.
Rolling in his desk chair backwards and forwards from his computer desk to
the coffee table of his bedroom. Charles
mixed the tonic in a chemistry beaker, drank the ingredients making sure the
camera would capture it and then again, passed out in his desk chair, falling
sideways to the right, conveniently landing on his bed but out of view of the
camera.
It happened
again, Charles would wake up the next morning to again find Goth Girl clothing
strewn across the floor of his bedroom.
He’d check the camera but couldn’t see anything. Charles decided ignore his mysterious black
outs. Time went by with black outs and
Charles finding Goth Girl clothing in his room, eventually it was hanging in
his wardrobe. He would go through the
clothing often thinking.
‘This
clothing isn’t even my size! Whoever
this girl is, she is way slimmer than me.’
Charles’s
experiences took a sinister turn when money started disappearing from his bank
account. Being so focused on studying to
be a doctor, it meant he didn’t go out much and so saved a vast amount of
money. But random amounts would go
missing to stores like Surf, Dive and Ski, Hot Topic and Off Ya’ Tree. But it got weirder when he woke up Wednesday
morning for school to see a pair of roller skates in his room and a pile of
roller derby gear along with it. Checking
his bank account on his laptop that morning he noticed over a hundred dollars
had gone to joining a roller derby league.
“What
the…!?”
That was
the last straw for Charles, but little did he realise his day was about to get
worse. It was the end of the first
semester of year ten, the final year of high school and Charles had an
appointment with the school career advisor.
Charles put so much effort into his studies that he was expecting a
glowing review of his work.
Later that
day, Charles put the incident with the bank account to the back of his
mind. It was after lunch, and he was
spending valuable learning time sitting in the Careers Advisors office. But that’s okay because he was expecting good
news. The grey, Curley
haired advisor walked back into the office, closing the door and plopped onto
his desk chair looking at a manila folder of papers. Charles began to feel anxious, gripping his
hands together and heart pounding in his
chest. The advisor spoke in his booming
Scottish accent.
“…with
these grades you’re going nowhere.”
Just with
that sentence, Charles Hyde’s world fell apart.
His heart dropped in his chest, a weight came crushing down upon him,
pulling his head low.
‘But I spent
my whole life on this…’
He was
thinking but all he could mutter like a sad little child was.
“…but…I
wanna’ be a Doctor.”
The advisor
wasn’t in the least bit sympathetic, he spent all his career dealing with kids
who had unrealistic expectations.
But the
grey, Curley haired Scot looked down upon this chubby, blonde haired, Steampunk
Teenager who turned into a blubbering child within a moment. Most kids respond with teenage angst but this
one didn’t’ and that managed to trigger some amount of sympathy.
“I tell ya’
what me laddie.”
The advisor
only used those terms when he liked someone.
A small spark of hope ignited within Charles as he looked up to see the
advisor turn in his desk chair and click away at his mouse while looking at the
PC screen.
“You still
have a chance BUT only if you ace your final English assessment.”
That was
it, the sudden hope that Charles had was depleted. His English class was a creative writing one,
he didn’t enjoy reading fiction, didn’t like writing stories or poems, wasn’t
interested in science fiction, fantasy or horror and was aware of the irony that he
liked Steampunk. He couldn’t see the
relevance of any of it towards his goal of being a Doctor.
“This is
it….I’m going to fail…”
He mumbled
to himself as he walked away from the advisor’s office mid-sentence. The old Scot noticed Charles’s devastation
but still felt annoyed at his rude departure and blurted out as the kid walked
out of his office door.
“What? Oh, you’re finished listening to me now. Byeeeeeee!”
Chapter 3:
this is the end, i’m going
to fail my lifelong dream
Charles
spent the evening at home, in his room, devastated and unable to move from his
desk chair. The only light in the room
was the desk lamp shinning upon his desk scattered with his English assessment
and random papers writing and printed information, anything to help him
out. His digital camera still stood on
the right of the desk far away from the calamity of an assessment, the laptop
on and pushed far away to the left with Microsoft Word open and ready. A template for ‘School Revision’ on the screen,
curser blinking and ready to be typed. Turning
away from his desk and looking over his right shoulder, Charles could see the
Chemistry set on the far right corner of the room, on the little coffee table,
wedged between his bed and closet. Set
up and arranged for another tonic.
“One…more…..try.”
He mumbled
to himself in desperation. Mentally
exhausted from four hours of pointless study, Charles Hyde turned on his
digital camera and spoke to it, stating everything that has happened and what
his final plans were. Then he got off
his desk chair and crawled to the Chemistry set, on his knees as if begging to
God to make his tonic work. He mixed the
ingredients, then stood up in front of the digital camera so it would have a good
view of his final ‘triumph’, holding the beaker with lime green fluid up and
declared his intentions to the universe.
“Here’s to
one last attempt at success. Cheers!”
Charles
Hyde skulled the liquid and then fell into a clump on his desk chair, slowly
spinning in view of the digital camera.
He then fell off the chair onto the bed.
The next
day Charles Jekyll woke up on top of his bed, again fully clothed in Goth Girls
clothing. This time he had black and
white striped socks pulled up to his knees, fishnet stockings underneath, dark
blue denim shorts, black short sleeved t-shirt with NIN on it, black and white striped
‘arm socks’ and his fingernails were painted black. He sat bolt upright in his bed.
“AGAIN! What the hell is going on!?”
Turning to
his left where his desk was, he noticed the laptop open and switched on and
next to the vast space of his desk was a neatly stacked pile of papers, next to
that the digital camera which was still on and recording. Looking back at the paper stack he noticed
the cover sheet for the Assessment sitting on top.
‘My English
Assessment!’
Alarm bells
rang in his head as Charles jumped out of bed to the desk, picking up the stack
of papers, neatly and in order was his scribbled notes, old assessment with
corrections and finally the assessment.
Charles was meant to create a ‘magazine’ with issues covering all the
subjects covered in his ‘English " Creative Writing’ class. Charles
Hyde was more analytical and scientific minded, or at least he tried to
be. The last thing he was is
imaginative, creative, and poetic. But
the Magazine Assessment sat on his desk, complete, covering all topics neatly
and colourfully designed.
‘This is
great but I have no Graphic Design skills and….I don’t remember typing this.’
But looking
through the Magazine, it was Charles’s work, his choice of words just more
improved and creatively put together.
Charles noticed his laptop on with a software program up and running
with the same assessment on it.
‘Microsoft
Publisher? Never thought about looking
for it on here…’
Charles
Hyde read through the assessment on the screen.
He even laughed out loud at some of it.
But going through it, the assessment was too racy for Charles, too
cheeky.
‘I can’t submit
this, it’s too offensive. I’ll get into trouble. It’s as if my tonic got me drunk and I just mucked
around with this assessment, like I didn’t take it too seriously.’
Then it
dawned on him again.
“I’ve
failed.”
Charles
didn’t’ have time to go through it all again, and he had to submit it at school
that day. Being overwhelmed at the lost
chance of his career, Charles Hyde slumped over the space next to his laptop
but that’s when he noticed a sticky note that must’ve come loose from the cover
of his typed assessment. Picking it up
it had what looked like a Girl’s handwriting.
It read;
‘Congratulations,
you’ve finished your Assessment. Now, chill out and stop being such a spaz!’ " Charlene
Hyde
“What the hell!?”
That’s when
he realised.
‘The
camera…!’
He quickly
turned to his right and fumbled with the digital camera, playing back the recording. Waiting and going through hours to the
previous night, he witnessed himself drinking the tonic, passing out and
standing up again as a Goth Girl version of himself. Hyde was slim, pale, straight, neck length
black hair, She went through Charles’s
wardrobe and said aloud.
“Ergh! What’s with this guys clothing?”
Ms Hyde
disappeared from view for a while then remerged in Gothic attire, She picked up the assessment, cringed and
then started making notes of her own, opening up Microsoft Publisher on the
laptop and started typing and clicking away enthusiastically.
The school
week had come and gone, Charles Hyde felt so anxious until he just felt sadness
and despair instead, already knowing he had failed and couldn’t complete his
lifelong goal. The next Monday morning
came, judgment day where Charles had his English class and would find the
results. The teacher
was handing out the assessment cover sheet with comments and results. It landed on Charles’s desk with a big,
bright red;
A+ “What!?”
Charles
couldn’t believe his eyes. Looking
through the assessment cover all he could see was bright red ticks and positive
comments. The short, brunette haired teacher
laughed at his reaction.
“Yeah, you
did a great job! I highly enjoyed
reading it. You got all your bases
covered but it was fun to read. I read
it out loud to the others in the Teachers’ lounge, we loved it. Hope you don’t mind?”
Charles
couldn’t believe it.
“Egh, no
that’s fine.”
That was
his last English class and Charles aced it.
A huge smile broke across his face and a weight lifted off his shoulders. He felt like he was going to float into the
air.
‘It’s
over….it’s finally over.’
Charles
Hyde made it to the very last day of high school, administration day. His final visit was to the career’s
councillor. The Scot was both impressed
and not impressed at the same time.
Looking at the PC monitor with Charles Hyde’s results.
“With these
results right now, you could get into university but most students with your
grades often end up committing suicide.”
Again,
Charles’s heart dropped. This was the
very final blow but when Charles thought about it.
‘I wasted
my youth on trying so hard to achieve very little. I’m flogging a dead horse. That’s it, I’ve had it! I’m going to finish my teenage years just
enjoying college and studying what ever the hell interest me.’
Funny
enough he left the office feeling a greatly relieved.
‘You know
what, I tried my best, I passed year ten and a lifetime of hell is over.’
He thought
as he walked away from the chaotic corridors of his High School, finally done
with the place and leaving ten years frustration and failure behind but also
feeling grateful to this mysterious Goth Girl, Ms Charlene Hyde.
Epiloge
Charles
Hyde’s life had changed for the better, he spent college studying his interest
and balanced it with having a social life.
On top of that he got a first Aid certificate and began volunteer work
with Saint John’s. This gave him the
idea of being a paramedic which was a more attainable goal compared to being a doctor. He always regrets his school life and felt
bad at how he was never good enough to be a doctor but he was grateful to
finally move on in life and achieve his goal. © 2023 Karl HerzogAuthor's Note
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