Blue

for once its not about you

I knew something wasn't right 

when I started craving him at night 

I called his name and he came 

He said "try this you won't feel the same" 

cause you see what he did was oh so differently 

he put something deep inside of me 

it made me numb 

i couldn't see 

I didn't notice anything around me 

it was strange but it felt real 

for once it felt so f*****g real

but it was fake 

it was fake

he tried to take what he could take 

but there was nothing left you see 

nothing left inside of me 

it was a blur 

I couldn't feel 

I really thought this could be real 

but as I fell I thought of you 

and him and him 

but mostly you 

When I looked up 

it was not you 

he didn't even resemble you 

because for once 

his eyes were blue

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

One falls so deep into the words, into this mirrored world that is covered in a dark canvas. You have painted the flow like a deep drug that makes the mind so numb. xo

[mel_central]

"try this you won't feel the same"
I know that we each interpret poetry differently, but this, this is magic. I have felt those things.

[Pink Pastel]

Woah girl your poems always flawless♡_♡

[hi]

ok i like it,sounds like a story where a lover was heart broken and finally found another but cant get over the x