01/10/16

That Sunday we kissed
I "felt nothing" but lips and tasted nothing but the weed we had smoked
I looked in your eyes and you looked in mine
I felt nothing but tears as I noticed you look through me
You looked at me, seen her and smiled
I looked at you and all I could see was my f*****g reflection in your eyes as you thought of someone else
that very moment at looking at me while looking at you I knew it was over
because truth is that Sunday we kissed
You felt nothing but lips as I felt my own heart break

Reviews

[Pink Pastel]

Dammmmm! Are you okay? I feel like I can feel the pain:'(

[H]

This poem is really good, I enjoyed the way you expressed it with such confidence.

[Lerew]

I can't make sense of the 7th line down. I can appreciate how open it is.

[The Twin Arenas]

Last line is perfect. You're a natural.

[Kari Kush]

Thank you so much I appreciate it

[terry smith]

I know this feeling..well written...reminds me of a poem I wrote

Just a warm body
When you invited me over
i thought that you wanted
to see me
but when i saw
the sadness in your eyes
while we were making love
i realized you
just didn't want to be alone...

[Kari Kush]

You're so talented thank you so much

[terry smith]

thank you for the compliment :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Sad, honest and powerful words for love.
"You felt nothing but lips as I felt my own heart break"
When the heart know. The love is untrue. Make the heart more sad. Thank you Kari for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kari Kush]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.