Big brown eyes

I cried for him nights and days
I thought he always felt the same
But months ago I found out the truth
That I loved him while he loved you
Now months went past and I lay in his bed
Reminiscing
Cause it feels like nothing has changed
Except he got to touch and slid inside
he got to play with what is mine
but not my heart or feelings this time
Cause big brown eyes left me to die
so now i'm dead with scars and lies
I now need sex to feel alive
so I came to him
I drove the miles
To see if maybe he can stick around a while
I prepared myself for when he leaves
Cause I know big brown eyes will never fall in love with me

Author's Note

Fix grammar and spelling thank u
Opinions and reviews are welcomed

Reviews

[Atama Rakugaki]

sad.

I wouldn't worry too much about grammar. verse is a little free form at any rate. spelling on the other hand... as far as I can see your spelling's fine.

[Kilmer]

Wow this is so sad but so well written

[Coyote Poetry]

We do know. Sometimes we will accept less.
"I prepared myself for when he leaves
Cause I know big brown eyes will never fall in love with me"
I like the above ending. Thank you Kari for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[H]

this is very well done, you convey a sense of emotional pain really well

[Kari Kush]

Thank you so much if there's any way you can look at my other stuff that would be very appreciated

[Leica Fox]

That is very painful, you did a great job of conveying that pain. Well done.

[Pink Pastel]

Wow sounds painful nicely done girl

[The Twin Arenas]

Now months went past and I lay in his head

This is great. Two perspectives in one line.