Trophy

Days can go by and years might pass 

but your name is all I will ever have 

It's deep in my skin 

pierced in my mind 

the guy that took my innocence 

you sat and just watched me cry 

as naive as I was 

you have all of me 

you took the one thing I had

as I bled on your sheets 

as I laid on your bed 

replayed the lies that you said 

I knew this was not love 

cause you left me for dead 

you preyed on a soul 

that was already cracked

cracked trophy I was

I mean that is what you said 

You said I was a trophy now you said you thought with the wrong head 

yea just to take what you wanted 

you took what you can 

Oh you got the prize 

the trophy 

you laughed with your friend 

and now you're back with her 

now you sit on her bed

you tell her you love her 

you tell her it's her 

but does she know that you told me 

it was never her 

that you said it was over 

that you said it was fake 

how you lied on her name 

just to fed off your prey 

it worked 

yes it worked 

cause you left me for dead 

with nothing left but your name 

stamped on my head 

Author's Note

Grammar is not good, i need feedback??

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Bad treatment is never forgotten. I liked the directness of the story and the thoughts. The ending was sad and realistic. Bad people will know karma one day. Karma can be a b***h when she returned the favor of abuse and mistreatment. Thank you Kari for sharing the powerful story.
Coyote

[Kari Kush]

thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[sinNsincerity]

This is really a good piece and if your're new to writing, don't worry so much about the grammar and such. All that will come with time. Just don't stop writing if it helps you. Get it all out.
That's what you did hear and that's what makes it great!

[Kari Kush]

thank u!!!!