Lions, Catfish & Reality

Cat stalks fish in tank

Dreams of being a lion

Falls in catfish truth

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Cat stalks fish in tank

Dreams of being a lion

Falls in catfish truth"

[Samuel Dickens]

This one is smile-worthy. Knowledge and wisdom are often hard and painful to acquire.

[Karen Redburn]

Ain't that the truth! Glad it was good for a smile, thanks for commenting and stopping by Samuel. Cheers!

[Tate Morgan]

I have seen this happen many a time a cat dreaming of being a lion. I know many a young man who relates to this literally

[Karen Redburn]

I agree it is a common occurrence, thankfully most men don't drowned but finally get it. Well some do anyway... thanks for commenting and happy Monday!

[Tate Morgan]

Happy Monday to you Karen you are welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha i love this ma'am! catfish truth indeed! such a smile your little ditty gives me ... thank you so much! :)
E.

[Karen Redburn]

Thank you and glad you had a laugh! Been thinking on this one for a few days. Still interested in tightening up the words, any suggestions welcome. Have a good day E.

[Einstein Noodle]

boy...i don't know...i think you pretty well wrapped it up..to stay in the haiku form its hard to add more description ... and i like the pride, the fall and the surprise of the prey .. its a life lesson well put .... already pretty tight in my opinion ;)

[Karen Redburn]

Thanks E. happy Sunday!

[sette]

i like the poem, it is simple in words but open to a lot of interpretations. one cool poem

[Karen Redburn]

sette, thank you again for the lovely comment. I've caught 3 interpretations so far. Wonderful to hear from you and have a great weekend!

[sette]

you are very much welcome