Hemingway Drips

Hemingway delusion's eat the day

Lost in writing sniff black lines

Dark letters white space here we pray

Afternoon sun stream rays divine

Grimy house drip drop goes the tap

Walls corner cobwebs crying dust me

Creativity messy 

Kids are home screaming food!

No time for Hemingway's scene

Reviews

[Rosie Brooklin]

Hemingway is one of my favorites. Nicely done!

[Karen Redburn]

Thank you and appreciate the comment!

[danny]

lol very smart i think that would go down well at a stand up comedy night very good work very brave

[R.E. Ray]

I love Hemingway, one of my favorite writers. Of course, if Hemingway were there, he'd be deep in a bottle of booze, numb to those drips, cries and screams--he'd just bleed on paper until another masterpiece came to life. Truly enjoyed this one!

[Karen Redburn]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, always appreciate your input Robert.

[Neville]

Ah' 'For Whom the Bell Tolls' sounds like you could do with a holiday, or read him in the bath maybe. An intriguing write & an enjoyable read to boot.......N

[Karen Redburn]

Very intuitive, yep a holiday would be heaven. Thanks for stopping by and reviewing!

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely....

[Cherrie Palmer]

To be consumed to create and capture images coming as fast as the speed of light, can put a damper on the weekly cleaning schedule.

[Karen Redburn]

Hey there, thanks so much for reviewing. We see eye to eye on this poem. Thanks so much for the comments!

[sette]

ernest hemingway, what a writer full of puzzles and mystery. there is soul in your writing karen.

[Karen Redburn]

Thank you for commenting.