Eternal Love

As the sun comes up seeking

the moon goes into hiding  

they both play the perfect 

game of hide and seek 

the only difference is that

the game never seems to cease  

news of the visit travels fast 

the moon comes up searching 

and the sun goes back in vain 

they don't cross each others paths  

but they see the shine left behind 

and will love each other for eternity

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Onlyme]

This made me smile adorable and unique and classy.

[Karen John]

Thank you for the compliment.

[Paul Bell]

Some may say this is the perfect relationship.
They certainly both need each other.

[Karen John]

They do need each other.

[Karen Redburn]

This is a beautiful and natural poem. I wouldn't know how to improve it, as writing on nature always leaves an impression of awe. A tiny suggestion dont (don't). Thank you for the read it was a humbling experience!

[Karen John]

Thank you so much!

[lessa (kenzie)]

So very well written, I like this write a lot. it is very well expressed

[Karen John]

thank u alex!