When I need u

When I need u

A Poem by Karen John
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When u miss that special one...

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When I longingly await your presence,
its like I'm being thrown into a whirlpool.

My mind threatens to retreat into the void,
and I no longer see what's in sight.

Instead my eyes can only see you,
your fingers firmly entangled with mine.

Your yearning face close to mine,
with eyes which beckon my lips.

I feel your breath upon my trembling skin,
creating butterflies in my stomach.

My rapid heartbeats are clearly heard,
echoing throughout this desolated room.

They resonate zestfully back to my ears,
making my craving chest swell up.

Oh! How I wish I could feel your hand,
Sliding across my wanting waist.

Just to draw me closer to yourself
and whisper tenderly in my ear,

"Baby, everything will be alright.
Now, let your smile shine brilliantly bright."

© 2017 Karen John


Author's Note

Karen John
Special thanks to Phill for helping me rewrite this poem!
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This is excellent .... expressive, poetical, nicely flowing and imaginative write - well done! :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Karen John

7 Years Ago

Thank u phill!!! Thank u so much for the help and everything!! U r just awesome!!
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