My Lovely One

haiku

 

Cherry Blossoms bleed

Around your stone my lovely one

Your battle is done

 

Reviews

[Kerry]

Sweet and eloquent, this beautifully captures the mood of a fallen hero. Nicely done!

[Stella]

Wow! Brilliant haiku! Great work!

[Angel Bird]

This is beautiful in its sadness! Wonderfully done! Great work!

[maiarusm]

Great imagery. I love your last line... It was a bittersweet ending...

[Tania Leigh]

I love this.....very tender and sweet, and "cherry blossoms bleed" is a fine example of great imagery.
Very nicely done!