LOVE

LOVE

 

Love stinks,

But not all types of love stinks,

There is happy love,

Dissapointing love,

Joyful love,

and of course Deadly love,

Love is when,

Two people meet,

They fall in love,

And be toegether forever,

That my friend... is RARE,

If someone tries that,

It'll probably go wrong,

I mean,

So many people these days,

I mean listen to what they want!

All they want is your body,

Not your personality!

But you still can find the one,

The one to love and hold,

The guy who wants you for you,

Not for your body,

But, I have to say,

Love is the closest thing we have to magic,

Love creates a magical path,

A path of great joy and happiness,

Well... most of the time :)

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Talismanic]

Loyalty, trust and respect don't even get a chance to grow... 'if someone tries that it'll probably go wrong' ... so much of what we want from love is just an instant fix to plug a hole in our otherwise meaningless existence and get a moment's pain-relief that only serves to do more damage :(
We have mass-produced-drug images of love. We are commodities to consume. When we do try to really connect as human beings we get discarded, so anyone who dares is naturally assumed to have a death wish.
Sometimes if it hurts you know you had it.
This strikes so many chords

[misha]

I loved the very end of it, "Love is the closest thing we have to magic" =) beautiful.

[Jocelin]

oooh sooooorry.. and know tthat!! kshiujghibv...
lol ^>^

[Emunah June.]

Dont forget the girl girl, boy boy love. Their love isn't any different. :-)