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- Karen

 

Has love been reduced to this?

Have our genitals become useless?

We just sit and text

wondering whats next

That's not sex

You fall in love with my words

I fall in love with your c**k

You type whats up doc?

You're not here

And I'm not there

We are both in a relationship

but in reality we're both single

We just don't want to admit it

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh this is really nice,so bold and exciting and naughty..
yes,i can see lots of..LOL,Xoxo:)),brb..
strange words..has it become to this
we just sit and text ,wondering whats next
i am in love with your words ,you are in love with mine
these are games of the mind,brain sex ha ha,but so nice
You're not here
And I'm not there
We are both in a relationship
but in reality we're both single
We just don't want to admit it
i love the thought behind this ,very exciting very bold ,very naughty ha ha ha
lovely write..

[JC]

im seeing more and more the knack you have for percieving this world, for exposing it and saying what we all should already know.

[MissWordSmith]

I have three letters for this
L O L !! I really liked this. It was witty, i-dont-give-a-damn-ish and clever too.
I actually Laughed out Loud here. hehe.
Keep writing!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Cool, great slant on the causlaness of relationships and texting...

[Emilee Grimm]

I love the way you wrote this and things like this happen all the time, too!! You are a very good writer. You write to the point. I loved it!!

[An owl on the moon]

This is very powerful, the comment on modern love (or whatever we want to call it)... Insightful, vivid, and biting... What has love become in this world? Is it love at all? Amazing write!

[Kelley]

This made me laugh in a way , but you its so true.

Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Michael X]

This strikes me as insight- pondering, crafty, raw and sincere. does texting take the sparkle
out of love, perhaps it seems less than sincere to read abbreviations , as when in past times it
would be expressed in a more expressive manner, like voice. You did a really nice job.

[Michael Carr]

this is a pretty good idea of this kind of relationship.
however, some of your words are a bit jumbled. the "whats up doc" line really felt forced.
not all poetry needs to rhyme.
that said, it's a nice style and I really enjoyed the intro to this piece.
good work.

LMAF? sure u don't mean LMAO?

[DavidRyan]

This is amazing. I always have hated the abbreviation language people talk in these days. I don't understand. Maybe just a product of being lazy? I like the story you tell. I especially like the part about being single already and not admitting it. Once you have feelings for someone else that is not your boyfriend/girlfriend, you are single. I would change the "has" in has our genitals become useless, to "have". Other than that, good read. Thank you for posting this. Hopefully texting is not the future version of sex.